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Speed composition in a few hours

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Bjarke Tan, Oct 8, 2023.

  1. #1 Bjarke Tan, Oct 8, 2023
    I wrote this in a few hours. Any feedback is welcomed. Thank you.
     
  2. #2 Michael Lückgen, Oct 9, 2023
    You had a good connecting pattern going on throughout.
    Remembers me a bit of the new Zelda titles.

    The "outside notes" felt off-putting and sometimes random to me.

    In total I won't say that I enjoyed that piece. It was a bit weird and sounded like you had some specific artistic vision, but I did not seem to like that vision.
    But it seems to be intentional like that.
     
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