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Piano samba

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Joe Galloway, Jun 22, 2021.

  1. #1 Joe Galloway, Jun 22, 2021
    Hey guys! I finally decided to get a live performance of one of my songs to see how it'd turn out.
    I always appreciate your critique! let me know what you'd change or what you thought, thanks again :)

     
  2. #2 Bjarke Tan, Jun 25, 2021
    I really like how you keep a consistent pattern throughout the piece but I couldn't really hear any melody in it. There was hint of a melody but once an idea of a melody was introduced it was like it was cut in half sometimes.

    Your performance was really great :)
    The chord at 1:47 is really beautiful.

    The ending is really great by it self but maybe not much related to the original idea maybe try to use a variation on the original idea for the ending that might help make it feel more connected or if you want to keep the original ending you could use the rythme from the original idea to make it feel more connected(or just hint of the rythme here and there).
    An other thing is the transition from quick rythme to long notes might be too quick. When you get to the long notes maybe you could use just the last two rythme of the original idea to the long notes so it creates a sense of familiarity.

    But it's just my opinion.
    Overall I think you did a really good job. Keep going :)
    Hope you found any of this useful.
     
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