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Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Duncan Formosa, Apr 2, 2022.

  1. #1 Duncan Formosa, Apr 2, 2022
    I had done a version of this piece a year or 2 ago but I didn't really know how to orchestrate it and I thought it sounded pretty terrible and there was a lot of fat on it I think, so I thought I'd give it another shot. I think it sounds way better now! Let me know what you all think!

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