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It's Too Late To Turn Back

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Wayne Bacer, Jul 8, 2017.

  1. #1 Wayne Bacer, Jul 8, 2017
    During last night's Redbanned Launch Party, Mike critiqued a piece that I'm working on. He suggested that the opening section was too short and needed to be repeated. Of course he was right so I extended it.
    I think we have a great opportunity in this forum to take advantage of all of the tools that Mike has made available. With that said, I'm posting my updated work in progress for your additional comments. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, thanks.
     
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