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First composition in 2023

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Carlos Riesco, Jan 13, 2023.

  1. #1 Carlos Riesco, Jan 13, 2023
    Hi everyone, happy new year.
    It's been a while since my last post here.
    In the last few days I was transcribing Rudy's main theme, from Jerry Goldsmith (only harmony and melody, not orchestration for now), and then I compose this little piece I want to share.

    I literally I took the same chord progression (except for 1 chord in the B section) and create a new melody. The other difference is that Jerry repeats the A section one more time at the end, but I personally think it was too much and it was time to move to a different place, so I finish my piece without that repetition. Do you think is very repetitive?

    Any feedback is welcome.
    Thank you.

     
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