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(Childhood) Tune Like Goldsmith

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Tino Danielzik, Aug 9, 2023.

  1. #1 Tino Danielzik, Aug 9, 2023
    Last edited: Aug 9, 2023
    Hey everybody,

    a friend of mine played me a short little tune from her childhood her father wrote for her on a cheap little casio keyboard. It was very short, only a few bars. I took it and had to do something with it, and suddenly I had something like a Goldsmith piece going on, although he would have modulated it already three times. :D

    https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/3fi0...Igel.mp3?rlkey=0viku5asuut3pn2sogoh7kw0f&dl=0

    Check it out and let me know what you think. It was a speed writing, so it's a little rough but presents the idea.

    Regards,
    Tino
     
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  2. #2 Daniele Nasuti, Aug 12, 2023
    the sound of initial piano and harp sounds cheap to me, but that's just my opinion.

    Then at half of the piece I felt I needed some more important changes in composition or orchestration, since at that point becomes a bit boring.

    Anyway I feel that if this music was supported by a film scene the images had supported the music very well, and viceversa.
    Good work.
     
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