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My track made specifically for Unleashed 7 (wasn't reviewed)

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Thomas van der Burg, Jan 26, 2022.

  1. #1 Thomas van der Burg, Jan 26, 2022
    Last edited: Feb 16, 2022
    Hey guys,

    i took the challenge to compose a simple melody for Unleashed 7. Unfortunately my track didn't get reviewed but I understand even Mike has a limit so no worries there.

    I am however curious what you guys think of it! It obviously is missing a b-section (something i learned with Unleashed 7 is very important!) but still, let me know!



    Thomas

    EDIT: Found it! It was the last track of Part 1
     
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  2. #2 Michael Lückgen, Jan 26, 2022
    Hey Thomas,

    I remember this song. I'm pretty sure it was reviewed on unleashed7. My guess is in part 2, but I'm not sure. Take a look again.

    Also I'm not sure every song needs an b-section if that is what you are saying. It really depends on your idea to begin with and how far you can stretch it until it needs something else from my understanding.
     
  3. #3 Thomas van der Burg, Feb 16, 2022
    Ah I just heard there were some hours lost between part 1 and 2. He probably reviewed it then. Do you remember anything from his feedback? :p
     
  4. #4 Thomas van der Burg, Feb 16, 2022
    I actually found it. It's funny. He discusses a place where he hears an "implied C or Em" But it actually is an Am, i literately played an A minor chord, but he didn't hear it hehe. A minor sets up for Eb just like C so i did it right :)
     
  5. #5 Thomas van der Burg, Feb 16, 2022
    Ahw, It seems like still some of it might have been cut off. Will never know if he listened the piece to the end and heard that it was a minor all that time! :D
     
  6. #6 Nico Bellisario, May 1, 2022
    The idea is strong, but imo it is not repeated enough before going into B variations.
     
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