The Name Game Pro Tip:
  1. Didja accidentally blow through the whole, "We're using our real names" thing on registration? No problem, just send me (Mike) a Conversation message and I'll get you sorted, by which I mean hammered-into-obedient-line because I'm SO about having a lot of individuality-destroying, oppressive shit all over my forum.
    Dismiss Notice
  2. You're only as good as the harshest criticism you're willing to hear.
    Dismiss Notice

My piece inspired by Mike's One Composition a Day #7

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Chris Morphitis, Jun 3, 2020.

  1. #1 Chris Morphitis, Jun 3, 2020
    Last edited: Jun 12, 2020
    Title says it really..



    I thought it would be a good unleashed submission, but wanted to post it on the forum in the meantime. Let me know your thoughts on it?

    I transcribed Mike's piece and tried to incorporate the brute force modulation techniques in mine.
    I also dug Mike's time feel, although my piece is in 9/8 and faster.

    here is Mikes piece-

     
    Alex O'Hagan, Dick Wallingford and Aaron Venture like this.
  2. #2 Doug Gibson, Jun 3, 2020
    Hi!

    The recording sounds great! Really nice job on the production side.

    Personally, I would have liked to have had a section in which we hear the music "play out more".
    Like a little solo, or something. Some flash, more variations in the texture and gestures.

    The video: I don't get it. Does it mean something? I found it distracting.

    By no means do you need to go this far, but I wished for something that would make me want to get up and pick up my guitar.



     
  3. #3 Chris Morphitis, Jun 3, 2020
    Thanks Doug, great feedback I will definitely take on board and agree with. Cheers for checking it out.
    Re video, I will change it if distracting, it was a random video taken from the back of my car, and as I was using YouTube to upload needed to quickly create a video, but obviously I need to get that process together a bit more.
    Tommy Emanuel is great, I will check those links.
     
    Doug Gibson likes this.
  4. #4 Chris Morphitis, Jun 12, 2020
    Changed the video, thanks Doug.
     
(You must log in or sign up to post here.)

Share This Page