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Orchestration Project with Redbanned members (Update 1.st post)

Discussion in 'Tips, Tricks & Talk' started by Alexander Schiborr, Aug 29, 2017.

  1. #1 Alexander Schiborr, Aug 29, 2017
    Last edited: Nov 4, 2017
    Hi Guys,

    The recent months and weeks I thought if it would be a possible idea if that we all could work together on something and share our results here, discuss them and learn from each other. The workflow could be the following:
    1. Someone composes on Piano a simple 2 handed playable short piece. Let´s say..30 seconds.
    2. Then he or she will provide the download for the midi of the Piano for everyone here
    3. We all orchestrate that 30 second Piano to orchestra.
    4. The results will be uploaded on a shared folder on Dropbox which we all have access.
    5. Then we present our ideas, discuss them, and speak about what was easy and not, what translated well to the orchestra or not etc etc. I think we could learn a lot.
    5. After that procedure another composer can chime in and write a short piece which then we orchestrate in another session.

    There is no pressure or basic rule like how often we practise that. It is up to everyones time schedule of course but I would recommend at least to do it once a month.
    Everyone single one of is free to decide how he orchestrates the track. THere is no right or wrong. I thought this could be a great idea for us so that we can improve both our writing and orchestration skills.

    What do you think guys? I have started a short piece for this exercises and I orchestrated a few bars...which is still not really finished. But if you like the idea and concept, I would then tomorrow prepare the midi data and files for you for download.
    Please let me know if there is general interest into such things.


    UPDATE: I have made a list and commissioned everything together as I think it is easier to find. So the list is the following:

    1. Polychordal Deep Space
    2. Fanfare for a Man
    3. Homeride


    Here are the links to the download of all the midi 2 Handed Piano Arrangements:

    https://www.dropbox.com/sh/7rtmkjxf0v8oac0/AAAwunTfaVU3txT6EiH5Z2Fwa?dl=0
     
  2. I think this is a great idea! I'd love to give this a try!
     
  3. Outside of the idea (go for it) I'm a little distracted because I like the air around the brass, but I don't like the brass sound itself. Are you using built-in room from the library?
     
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  4. Love the idea. Count me in :)
     
  5. I'm in! Great idea.
     
  6. #6 Alexander Schiborr, Aug 30, 2017
    Last edited: Aug 30, 2017
    Great, I will go and prepare the download stuff then.Short question: any idea for a good shared folder concept where every single one of us can upload / download / edit the stuff? Dropbox is possible, but therefore I need all of your emails to invite you. If you like the idea, sure I could do that (just sent me your mail in a pm) or..if somebody has cooler and more efficient idea let me know.

    Here is the DL Link:
    https://www.dropbox.com/sh/7rtmkjxf0v8oac0/AAAwunTfaVU3txT6EiH5Z2Fwa?dl=0

    There are 2 files: Mp3 for reference (if you like or need), 2 Hand Split midi file. One side note: I didn´t write the sketch to a click track. But sure if you like you can use my performed tempo just as a general guideline, but you can fit it to the cubase or pro tools click very easily.

    @Mike Verta

    Yes, it is all built in ambience only and no additional effects like delays or reverb plugins. Maybe..it is the postprocessing with eq which you probably find strange?

    Here is an unprocessed version without eq:

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/s0ejf1du4l5in15/Alexander_Schiborr_Polychordal_Deep_Space_no_eq.mp3?dl=0

    Anyways: If you have questions or if there is something where you dont know how to do it, you are welcome to ask.
     
  7. Whose brass library is that? Is that Cine-something?
     
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  8. Spitfire symphonic brass
     
  9. Took a random 10 minute stab at this.....when I get more time I'd really like to read some in depth stuff on mine and your guys' tracks. Keep in mind I'm the noobiest of the noobs, so anything you guys got I'd welcome.

     
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  10. Very cool, scott. Ia m going tomorrow to check it out and will come back with some detailed briefing.actually heading to bed,so
     
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  11. Thanks man, much appreciated!
     
  12. Hi Scott. Just had my morning coffee and just listened a couple times to your rendition. Before I go and comment, I would like to know a few things:

    1. How long did that take you to create?
    2. What difficulties you had? Where there things for you which were easy or hard to do?

    Best,
    Alex
     
  13. So here are my thoughts:

    Part 1 (1 seconds - 11 seconds): I like the beginning with the brass focus and how you hand over the voices to the higher strings (until 11 seconds). Thats cool and definitely a way how it can be done. Maybe..you could think also about woodwinds to hand over the voices? The contrabassoon at the end takes me a bit off, but I guess thats not your fault here. A short explanation: Those 3-4 very deep notes on the piano were just played for maintaining a pulse and meter so that I know when to start with the next section.
    Part 2 ( 12 seconds - 22 seconds)
    Here you use a mix of strings and brass. While you can do that, I would probably use a slight color change with more weight on the strings / woods because the whole beginning was so brass focusses I would think it is nice to have here a color change maybe? That is at least my thought. A little side note: The choir is for me very out of context. What was your intention with the choir? It seems you wanted to use it for harmony here.
    Part 3 (22 seconds 32 seconds)
    I think the choir lines clouds a lot the main line. It is imo here a dynamic and mixing problem. But it is hard for me to hear where the main line is intended. Those shorts on the trombones(?) are also very distracting. Rather than using all of the orchestra again, I would probably simplify the one or other part, maybe the first part at 22 seconds - 26 seconds can be very focussed on a few elements. By reducing you would have a nice contrast to your previous sections?
    32 seconds - End: I like that you change to your strings more, but again: That choir..you should take a look at that.

    In general I would say it is good start for a beginner here. My main obversavation what imo you should a bit work on:

    - more contrast in colors
    - Use more woodwinds (Piccolo, Flute, Oboe, Clarinette), also melodic percussion (I barely heard any of both)
    - check your levels and mixing (see choir)
    - try to make a plan before and go listen a couple of times through the piece and thinking what your mainline (your melody) should be like in every part? Do you want a clear color or a mixed color? It feels that it was not so clear where to move your voices.

    Just let me know if you have questions.
     
  14. #14 Alexander Schiborr, Sep 5, 2017
    Last edited: Sep 5, 2017
    ok, guys, I am so far finished, did some few revisions. Overall some things werent not that hard I find, but others didn´t went so easy, probably because of sample limitations, at least sometimes. I did a screencast for it and would provide more infos.
    My intention was to work with contrasts in orchestrations as I felt that my idea is pretty "simple" and also repetitive I needed to switch voices forth and back with change in colors as well to keep the thing "alive" or "interesting".
    The most difficult thing was this second part starting at 15 seconds where the piano absolutely doesn´t well translate to the orchestration or the samples, I had really some struggle there to decide what orchestral instrument to use for this melody..not because I don´t know the ranges, and what works there, but asthetically it was hard to decide. One thing was clear: Not again some brass, because my whole intro section was brass driven and I wanted a contrast there. Anyways..just take the tour until 56 seconds.

    If you have questions or better suggestions, I am happy and thankful.

    I am looking of course for more of your own renditions.
    Thank you!

     
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  15. Alex,

    Sorry so long to reply...had a very busy weekend.

    1: Literally was 10 minutes....wife and I were on our way out the door and she got a call she had to take, and I'd seen your post earlier in the day, thought it was a cool idea and loaded it up to handle later on.

    2: The first difficulty was sample limitations.....the only thing I have for orchestral samples is Sonuscore's The Orchestra, and I couldn't find anything for that part about 08 seconds in where the piano sits really high; I just don't have anything in that library that would do that in the time I had.....or at least, I couldn't find it, lol.

    Second difficulty was just layering....as you said in the critique, I really don't know what I'm doing....would have been beneficial I think, to have a plan beforehand about what was going where. The choir was like you said....just for me and for harmony. I love the way the choirs sound and wanted it in there, but I agree, it doesn't sit well.

    Thanks for taking the time....I'll do it again sometime this week if possible, using your critique. Hopefully it sounds better, thanks!
     
  16. #16 Alexander Schiborr, Sep 5, 2017
    Last edited: Sep 5, 2017
    Hey Scott, Yeah Samples are very limited to real orchestra and if sonusscore orch is the only library for orchestral music you have then this is even more difficult. the only thing I would suggest to spent a bit more time with it..10 minutes is probably too less..
    Regarding your questions how to layer, especially when you are a beginner try to make simple orchestrations, think of three things:

    1. Melody
    2. Chords
    3. Bass

    When you start orchestrating think about where is your main focus? Normally that is the melody or it can be also a rhythmic figur. Now ...think about what instruments in the orchestra could be suitable to use for the melody or the mainfocus. A melody written on c5 range wouldn´t be suitable to play by french horns. So here you need to learn and to get to know the typical meat ranges of the orchestral instruments and how they sound in their range.
    An Example: In the intro bars I decided to use mainly brass instruments because look I wrote this few chords: They are rhythmic and have a kind of "fanfarish" touch to it. So..to this kind of stuf..brass translates excellent. And in that mid range there..there comes in mind: French Horns / Trombones and for the higher repeatition the trumpets. Sure..it is possible to use also other instruments there. Like Violas and Violins but..they don´t translate well to the style of what I have written. But technically it would work also. So here you see: It is a matter of style and choice and also don´t look only at one part isolated. See the parts after and before. Because those define your orchestration as well. But first I would say: Try to repeat and work the things I mentioned.
     
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  17. This thread is an excellent idea. Alexander I love your compositions and look up to your orchestration skills. I think it's great to be able to get your feedback in here. Just saying. I'll try to join if I manage to overcome my workflow obstacles : I wanted to learn to compose in notation form but might stick to the piano roll view like you did .
     
  18. Hi Alexander! I'm still working on my own rendition of this sketch, but thought I'd give my thoughts on your version in the meantime.

    1. Only noticed this after a couple of times, but the harp seems strangely off the beat It's a good color to use there and I like it, but my inner ear hears it as A-A#-C#-D-C#-A# instead of A-A#-C#-D.
    2. You said you struggled with 0:15 and I think part of that is because you have the strings play sustains instead of shorts. I too reached for the strings in this part, but I have them play in a marcato/staccatissimo fashion. I think it's also possible to just have the upper lines play legato and keep the chords as sustains, but then some of the notes would have to be dragged out a bit more, I feel. So while I agree with your use of color here (mainly strings) I think the tone should be just as accented and bouncy (for lack of a better word) as the opening.
    3. I like the low notes at 0:20-0:21, tuba + timp?
    4. You have some high woods at 0:22 that I think you don't need (it's either flute or piccolo, I can't say for sure). If you feel you need to change colors here, I think you could do bar 588 on horns and 589 on trombones. They play the same rhythm, but by changing the color from horns to bones on the 2nd time through, there's some more interest and I don't think you need them playing together this early on, especially since you added some string chords which give this particular section extra weight alread (I like those extra chords btw. I don't really "hear" them but I can "feel" them).
    5. Bar 592 Harp arpeggio is perfect there, I think!
    6. Do you have bassoons at bar 593? I think I am hearing them, but I'm not sure! If so, I think you could maybe give them a little more flourish, or perhaps a passing note, but that's a nitpick :)
    7. The arpeggio before bar 594 (0:29) is quite nice.
    8. Just before bar 595, you have the violins play fairly high here (starting on C6) and I'm a bit torn on whether that works or not. Maybe the samples are letting you down here, but it feels a bit too intense. My first thought is to lower the violin line one octave and have flutes double it (so the flutes are on C6 and the violins on C5).
    9. Frombar 598 on out, I feel like you're really starting to show what you can do and I don't have much to add, except that perhaps the flourishes go on for just a smidge too long and start sounding somewhat random at around bar 609.
    I should note that I'm just a hobbyist composer, so please take all my nitpicks with a fair few grains of salt. Overall Iliked your attempt and your use of color, your orchestration shines when you have cool arpeggios and flourishes going on, as well as in the tutti sections. There are just one or two moments in the piece where I think you went slightly overboard with doubling, And yeah, that bit at 0:15 needs a little love :) Other than that, I think you did a good job orchestrating this. You do really know how to orchestrate a rich, tutti sound which (to me) shows you have a very solid understanding on when to use which instrument.

    Hope this was of some use to you!
     
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  19. I downloaded the file and will give it a go as a speed exercise when I have a free evening... ;) Will comment on the contributions so far later today.
     
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  20. Sounds great, looking forward to your rendition. :)
     

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